conscience

i couldn't sleep so i wrote this to clear my head please enjoy.

My mind has been going crazy lately
I'm not sure where this life is taking me
Sometimes it's not what you say that makes
A person; but what you do that makes you
So who made me?
Who made me?
cause i don't think i've been myself lately
fake friends, even my family hates me
i was cursed with the voice to speak nothing
but the god honest truth
So why i get hated for doing what everyone
expects and asks me to do ?
i do not understand so please explain to me
the rules; cause clearly what you want me
to do is lie to you tell you everything
you want to hear cause thats what your used
to, so why do you ask me to be real with you
when real isn't what your content to you
should of just been honest and told me to lie to
you,how could you want real but can't be real with
you i guess some people really can't handle the truth
probably why i'm an outcast in my family and at school
just because i think differently voice my opinions
and let my voice be heard when i feel like i'm being used
i don't understand why the world hates me but society made
me; taught me everything i needed to know like
how to look, how to dress and which celebrity had a baby
why couldn't i have been one of those babies?
born into riches never slaving for hrs wondering
how their bills getting paid this week.
but thats just it society is crazy
they say we won't be content if we don't have this
then when we have it its still not enough
were now salvishs to world and its hype.
when will it end ?
only god can decide .

Author's Note

ignore grammar errors

Reviews

[Gummy.G]

This is such a "You touched my mind" poem. A "I can relate", so true to my life and the lives of others. Should've seen my face when I was reading out loud this piece of yours, my head was in the clouds, my hands in the air, for it speaks the truth and it took me by surprise. I want to express how I feel without the banter of emotions and here you are doing it for me and millions of others as I speak. Great job.

[cre]

An honest rant.. [no irony intended]... you'd be great in the ladies change room, referring to: "how do I look in theses jeans".. I see no problem with people that say it how it is, on the provado they don't arc-up when confronted with retorting honesty .. enjoyed the spill.