Metamorphosis
A Book by Trapped
 You see criminals on the news, but what if there was one that ruled them all? What if that criminal was in middle school and had powers?  © 2018 Trapped
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Telling you now it sounds like an anti-villain to me. Captain Right and Metamorphosis need to have an epic battle scene. Funny thing is is that both our characters r in high school
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Ha. Morpha isn't easy to beat. She has an army of oversized messed up prison dudes.
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6 Years Ago
Yep. But it’s hard to beat a kid who’s always right. He could easily say you don’t have superp.. read moreYep. But it’s hard to beat a kid who’s always right. He could easily say you don’t have superpowers and he’s right but with your anti villain she could mess up his brain by saying are you sure cause nothing you say is right and could totally mess up his power which would be like THE BEST FIGHT EVER CAUSE SHE COULD MESS UP HIS POWERS SO HE COULD... OMG DUDDDDDEEEEE
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6 Years Ago
In the end, she wins by saying right is wrong and it would reflect back on him and he'd be normal.read moreIn the end, she wins by saying right is wrong and it would reflect back on him and he'd be normal.
Boom.
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6 Years Ago
That’s what I’m saying! It would mess with his brain so he would accidentally say he’s never r.. read moreThat’s what I’m saying! It would mess with his brain so he would accidentally say he’s never right and it would mess up his power and the whole universe as we know it and cause you villain to win and for him to revert to hit crappy fighting skills and start to loose but then. Oh. My. God. Is your villain able to turn other people into animal villains like u cause then you could like make him one of you and yeah. Dude I love it already
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6 Years Ago
No she isn't able to convert other people.
She is able to control them though.
Oops I.. read moreNo she isn't able to convert other people.
She is able to control them though.
Oops I didn't mean to spoil.
Whoops
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6 Years Ago
Oooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Dude. Do u realize what this means?
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6 Years Ago
What?! TEAM??
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6 Years Ago
Dude. I can’t even imagine how bad a*s this fight would look and how we could end the fight on a m.. read moreDude. I can’t even imagine how bad a*s this fight would look and how we could end the fight on a major cliff hanger
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6 Years Ago
Ooh yes! Like literally a cliff. You falling off of a cliff and me saving you for no reason. Also, q.. read moreOoh yes! Like literally a cliff. You falling off of a cliff and me saving you for no reason. Also, quick, come up with a weird mutant lab name. Example: BiteTech
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6 Years Ago
Hmmm yes that could work. But the question is why would I save you? Message me now we giving them to.. read moreHmmm yes that could work. But the question is why would I save you? Message me now we giving them to many spoilers lol
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Added on November 21, 2018
Last Updated on November 21, 2018
Tags: fiction, fantasy, Criminal
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TrappedNaperville, IL
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I just write to escape the outside world and to erase my pain.
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