If only they knew

If only they knew

A Poem by Traidy
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A child's death

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-If only they knew,
The chances too few,
A heart so weak,
The blood would leak,
 
the vessels broke,
A dozen bruises,
So the story wrote,
They All gave excuses.
 
A slap here,
And a shove,
So much to fear,
Such little from love,
 
In and out,
A life of rule,
A child about
A life so cruel.
 
To late to save,
This poor pitied soul,
A sour cry gave,
As he was lowered into a hole,
 
Mourn we shall,
With our minds on the child,
A desperate wail,
In his darkest hour

© 2008 Traidy


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wow, the flow on this was amazing as well as the concept. (i noticed your new and i just wanted to check out your writing and welcome you to the site)

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Traidy
Traidy

Dunellen, NJ



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