Mother

Mother

I'm not your friend I'm not your foe... I'm here to lift u when you are low... I'm not a classmate or the local bully... I'm the 1 that loves you fully.... I don't dismiss your giggles n tears... my job is to protect you from your fears... I know your mind your soul your heart... and pain within these
tares me apart... I will always be here like no other... this is my choice I am your mother

Author's Note

Another I had written awhile back, when my girls were becomming teenagers.

Reviews

[linear]

Very good rhyme and rhythm......................and of course a beautiful message to all children :O)

[spiritwind]

Very well expressed. The opposites bring definition and repetition and I love that sort of devise in a poem. You have a lovely heart... the heart of a mother. A very good mother. I have read two of your poems today and am really impressed by the simplicity of your words but the complexity of their presentation and their depth of meaning.

[Traycee]

Thank you

[Crimson_Catastrophe]

I like it. It has sweetness and a simplicity to it.
Cute.