negative to positive

negative to positive

A Poem by Traycee

NEGATICE TO POSITIVE

·         The best things in life are always free...an autumn breeze, a strangers smile, or a bounce on daddy's knee...I lost out on the knee, but accepted the smile, and embraced the breeze for just a while. ------Tracy Jeune 9/19/2002

© 2012 Traycee


Author's Note

Traycee
I wrote this, actually to myself, to prove I am a survivor. I hope it inspires.

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wow, I can relate 100%! I come from a very hard and difficult childhood. Short and to the point I like it. WE ARE SURVIVORS,NO DOUBT!!!!!Thank you for your friendship. SO your from NY, cool I have a sister who lives in Brooklyn. I just came back from visiting her,hahaha,how funny is that.




Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Traycee

12 Years Ago

yes, I am born n raised in NY. Thank you for appreciating my writing :)
Rob Santana

12 Years Ago

yes I can relate to your writing. Looking forward to reading more of your writings.



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I really like the presentation of your thoughts... it gives separation to each progression... and what I like most is that the tone doesn't whimper, doesn't whine, doesn't say feel sorry for me. It said to me to enjoy what I get even if it is just for a while because doesn't it feel good to get that much... and it does. I liked the image of embracing that breeze .. I can actually visualize that and it is a freeing visualization.

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow, I can relate 100%! I come from a very hard and difficult childhood. Short and to the point I like it. WE ARE SURVIVORS,NO DOUBT!!!!!Thank you for your friendship. SO your from NY, cool I have a sister who lives in Brooklyn. I just came back from visiting her,hahaha,how funny is that.




Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Traycee

12 Years Ago

yes, I am born n raised in NY. Thank you for appreciating my writing :)
Rob Santana

12 Years Ago

yes I can relate to your writing. Looking forward to reading more of your writings.
It's really quite lovely :O)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Traycee

12 Years Ago

As always, thank you sir :o)
Very deep.
It made me think. I like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Traycee

12 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Traycee
Traycee

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