storm

 Alone in the storm I feel the rain against my skin, I hear the thunder inside my head, and see the lightning behind my eyes. Hurricanes and tornadoes that no one else can see.  No one can feel my storm and no one can understand the wrath coming down upon me. The hail that strikes my face and the wind that blows my hair.  Is this an inner storm or is this the explosion waiting to come out.

Author's Note

For anyone battling inner deamons.

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

inner demons and darkness is what I battle....... Now Im starting to let my pen bleed out my madness.

[Traycee]

Thats how I began writing, I had noone to turn to, so I turned to my pen.
Only your own words can describe your feelings, use them, and good luck :)

[Rob Santana]

oh man!!!! Im starting to see we might have similiar backgrounds.....I read this writing and for a minute there I thought I wrote it,hahaha,wow. I love it. it's going in my library as a favorite :)

[Traycee]

Thank you sincerely.

[Rob Santana]

your very welcome.

[linear]

The torment lies within .......Inner turmoil.....disappointment at how harsh life can be.......it can seem so unfair....we have to try and focus on the positive ....well written :O)

[Traycee]

Ty ;).....my kind man