Silent Audience

 

Voices swirl

Around me

Darting in and out…

 

Soon I cannot

Understand what is said…

 

I am a piece

Of the silence

Looking in on

Another dimension…

 

Reviews

[cartera]

I would like to see you read this again and follow it where it takes you: Kubla Khan and all that.
Will read more soon.

[cest la vie]

You have captured my feelings when I pause and reflect..Beautifully written..

[Tate Morgan]

Profound to find that inner peace from the quiet of lifes every waking moment
tATE

[Stacey Watts]

Nicely thought out piece. Very well done. A silent participant perhaps in another galaxy.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sometimes we can get so lost within ourselves that we feel like an outsider to anyone around us...
again you can really ring some profound thinking in such small verse.

[deeps]

Hmm! This kinda could go off from the last write I read,
As looking into the future.. I like this, but I oft. wonder
what another dimension would be like.
I like this, makes one ponder.