Internal Blow~

Diary of a Dead woman

Pull the chains from my eyes

don't mind the soft tissue being removed

it's numb in the places your raking

over

These thick silver links have seen the best

of you and I

in the quiet sinful nights dripping

from our fantasy's made real

When we were bound not

only at the wrists and ankles

but by the caress of cold metal 

against my soft pinks folds

c**t exposed

straight to the bone...shock treatment

God how that last link made me squirm

almost removing an eye with

zero vision

damn those shadows 

inside the lens of my life

It's over

don't breathe

there's no blood so don't squirm

just chains at my feet 

with a flesh overtone

Can you hear the Jester laughing

inside the empty pits of what use

to be my heart and soul?

I do...

The vibration of the echoes are keeping me half alive

Is your soul half full or half empty?

Don't answer... no-one gives a damn

Author's Note

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

It's over
don't breathe
there's no blood so don't squirm
just chains at my feet
with a flesh overtone

Such words of "pain" are tearing apart the "value; the chain" of real love .. ripping through its deep fleshes of heat. Very intense write ... it`s pertified in words of absolution itself.

[†Tracey†]

I like to bare my pain to page and keep it from my soul. Thank you..

[Wórdsmíth]

And, you do a great job. A readers wants real emotions in a writer`s stuffs to label than writer a "great" writer and you here do a very great job. Indeed. I`d be looking forward to reading your stuffs.

[†Tracey†]

Thank you. I will return the favor.

[Souladareatease]

God how that last link made me squirm

almost removing an eye with

zero vision

damn those shadows

inside the lens of my life


indeed Dear Tracey...haunting...
the whole of the work is as deep as You ever write...I could contemplate for hours, but still feel as sad as when first read---great write!!!

[†Tracey†]

Thank you .. it was just a dark sad moment.. and a vent of sorts..xo :) I'm good..xo

[Souladareatease]

:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

but by the caress of cold metal
against my soft pinks folds
c**t exposed
straight to the bone...shock treatment

Wow that is straight up raw... the heat of the moment can be very blinding to the hearts true feelings.

[†Tracey†]

Or when your feelings are tied up in a moment you are waiting for.. Thank you Cowboy..xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure.

[The Analog Kid]

"God how that last link made me squirm
almost removing an eye with
zero vision
damn those shadows
inside the lens of my life.."

This is a potent stanza, Tracey. Lots of despair in this write. These are cathartic though...

[†Tracey†]

Thank you...it was a little at least.. :/

[The Analog Kid]

:)