fantastic and heartwrenching. cleverly worded and superbly emotional." do not go gently into that dark night" seek out what you desire and make your stand. well done!
Wow.. I don't know what to say.
I f*****g loved it! Really, my favorite poem yet. So exhilaratingly beautiful, so dynamic yet so soft. I greatly enjoyed the energy portrayed in your words. A little piece of me melted.
Once again, great write :)
This speaks to me of two sides of the same woman, the light side that behaves how she thinks her lover wants of her light and goodness, proper, and the darker side watching but wanting to be set free to be herself, one with who she wants to be. The "good' side has the lover and the "bad" girl inside wants to be loved for who she really is, but for some reason believes that she cannot. Just a phenomenal write, if I hit the mark and even if not, it's a wonderful unique pen.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
I love your take on it..and really appreciate you reading me and giving me such an in depth review.... read moreI love your take on it..and really appreciate you reading me and giving me such an in depth review.. I will let every reader make it their own story ;) lol..xo
Must love be so complicated? It shouldn't be, yet we make it so... Is this love or the disilusioned desire for it? I would lean towards disilusionment, but that is only my opinion. I believe love is meant to be simple, but we foolish mortals tend to screw it up. I am no exception. You truly have a gift for presenting the mysterious without revealing much if anything, yet in a way that most can grasp at least a tiny taste of... Amazing!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
We all are bits and pieces of each other..and so if a small bit of me is amazing to you I'm am truly.. read moreWe all are bits and pieces of each other..and so if a small bit of me is amazing to you I'm am truly blessed :) thank you..xo
Very heartfelt and endearing. It's a very precarious position to be foresaken especially when it comes to love. Great job. This was a very eloquent poem. I really enjoyed it. :) I liked how the picture also represented the true meaning of the overall message within your poem.
After reading this several times and taking the evening to digest it, I have one possibility that, as far as I can tell, no one has made reference to. Mirrors are reflective so is she (you perhaps) really looking for someone to see her as she is or is she looking into that reflection and trying to find out who she is?
Subtle but then again from what I've read of your work...
Nice piece regardless of who's looking
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
I shall never tell...it is for your mind to ponder...but ...nope ...can't tell lol..xo thank you fo.. read moreI shall never tell...it is for your mind to ponder...but ...nope ...can't tell lol..xo thank you for your insight.. I liked what your take on it was...xo
You show a tenderness and honesty in your selfish desire to have what another seems to have... I say "seems to" because you never know just what she has of him. He may indeed love you most but give you less...
A great poem! So real as to read from my memory...
Love it!
I'd be pleased if you could check out my new book on lulu.com... It is an account of my journey through depression and coming out through my own hard work into the light....xo
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