Such is Life

Music Flowing Freely

                                           No beat to follow

A randomized symphony 

Reviews

[Allan Eddings]

I enjoyed the sentiment of this piece immensely, indeed much of its virtue rests upon one solitary fact for me: my expectations. When one reads the title, you are expecting - or I was at least - one of those horribly derivative pieces; full of pitiful and disjointed phrases; the only subject being gales and storms, and unknown ills moaned out to the clouds and to the night. Where the author is the most unfortunate of men; who thinks that they have exhausted all life has to offer by the age of sixteen; and who believes themselves tormented by their own genius. A miracle then to me is that this piece confounds my expectations.

It expresses a simple sentiment and in contradicting my expectations I find myself enjoying it all the more. Thank you for sharing.

A.E.

[Wórdsmíth]

"Randomized Symphony?" Sounds pretty interesting. I like the "flow" of "beats." This poem`s seemed itself a notion of waves flattering across the winds with the cold sensations to life. I love this poem! Wonderful Art!

[Katelyn]

Simple and beautiful. Great job :)

[Marie]

You've capturred life here--a randomized symphony.

[Kaylor Mason]

Life is like that--and it always seems to me the conductor of the symphony must be beyond human comprehension

[AK]

Very nice! The poem, though short it may be, expresses so much. Great write!

[Honey54]

LOVE IT!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

very simple and meaningful...

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

WOW!!!!! The simplicity of this poem packs a real punch!!!! This is very good, and I personally believe you have captured life in its entirety wonderfully. It is quite random, as well as being unpredictable, which is suggested by "no beat to follow" and it just happens, there is no real planning to it (on our part) as suggested by "music flowing freely" Life is something we were meant to lose ourselfs in. Beautiful!!!!!!

[MandaBear]

So amazing!!