Black Crystal

A Book by Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus

Critique my work please!! All Constructive criticism welcome :)

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© 2012 Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus

Author's Note

This is a story collaborated with me and Beth A. Dusk

Well, if you want to know read a little and see if your interested. I try to add a chapter or two every day (Weekdays)

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Elizabeth Porterfield

That sounds really good actually, and the power of summer sounds like it would be something seasonal, like he could bring in heat waves and make plants thrive and control the weather in summer, and of course, he would probably be a little volatile, kind of unpredictable. Any way, this idea sounds really awesome!!!!! I can't wait to read it!!!!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Max_E_Stone

This is great. When you finish, you should post to smashwords. That way, you get paid for your awesome writing! Looking forward to seeing more

Posted 12 Years Ago

Elizabeth Porterfield

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

25syd25

Cool

Posted 12 Years Ago

MandaBear

I cant wait to read more!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Stefan224

yes you should i would buy it for sure it sounds like it would be amazing

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Awesome story! I think you should surely write it, it'll be epic! I'll be looking forward to it. Keep writing! An rr for the first chapter, please?