I want to Be

I want to Be

A Poem by Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus

I want to be a writer
One you will never soon forget
The kind that brings a story to life
Leaves you waiting for more

Using just a few words
I want to paint a picture as clear as day
I want the smells to lift from the page
I want you to feel as if you where there

I want to be the kind of writer to adore!

© 2012 Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus


Author's Note

Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus
Since I learned how to read, and I'm not even sure when I did I was to young I have wanted to write. I still do, though I have never been able to go far in a story. I'm on here because i would like to improve my writing skills... and maybe one day write that story I have been trying at :) Please comment. Thank You.

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The thing about writing is it can be a lifetime occupation. I'm pushing 60 and have been at it seriously for 20 years though I always was a writer. The only thing I can say is, keep at it, ineviatbly you'll get better. Finding what to write about is actually the hardest task.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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The thing about writing is it can be a lifetime occupation. I'm pushing 60 and have been at it seriously for 20 years though I always was a writer. The only thing I can say is, keep at it, ineviatbly you'll get better. Finding what to write about is actually the hardest task.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Fantastic...and that's how it begins. What a great goal...!

Don't let anything stop you.



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awesome poem i to wanna be a writer truly great write always follow ur dreams and let nothing stop u

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is certainly something I can relate to. Most people on this community wish to improve their writing, to strike the right notes in the brains of readers, to learn something, and just to express, in the un-vaguest way possible. And I have really sort of evolved from my previous writing, like, if I try to differentiate between my earlier writings and my present ones, I do see differences, and I can feel my writing has matured, and its mostly inspiration, and my renewal of interest in this field. This poem simply emanates truth, and I love the simple words you used to be direct and put down whatever's on your mind.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Very nice poem! great aspirations. You could try using a little more punctuation, maybe?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a great one it reminds me of when i was little and how i always wanted to be a song writer and write poetry

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on April 3, 2012
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Tags: Writing, learning, poetry, dreams

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Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus
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No expressions., KS



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Kind of have everything on hold for awhile... Not sure when I will be posting anything new.... more..

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