The Tide

The Tide

A Poem by Treylee
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Just a little ramble inspired by the beautiful ocean here in San Diego.

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I run forward as fast as I can

Only to be pulled back by some unknown force

My whole life I have ran from it

But I’ve only gained a few inches

Sometimes I even lose my progress

As she drags me out farther and farther

So I start again

Pulling and fighting to get away

But I’m beginning to believe

That this was what I was created to do

Run in only to be pulled away

Day after day.

© 2016 Treylee


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This piece has so much emotion and meaning, and it relates so much to everyday life. This is a really good piece, simple but powerful! I really hope to read more of your work, keep it up! Thank you for sharing, as I know it can be hard.
~Tealah.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Treylee

8 Years Ago

Thank you! That really helps my confidence to post more!
Mistaken Angel

8 Years Ago

I'm glad, I hope to see you post more soon.(:

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Added on February 24, 2016
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Tags: San Diego, Ocean, rambles, poem, beauty, nature

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Treylee
Treylee

San Diego , CA



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Im a stay at home mom, a photographer, adventurer, and blogger at wyobab.com. I love to write and have never really felt comfortable putting my pieces out there but I thought why not. Im an old soul w.. more..

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