loves pain

loves pain

A Poem by Taylor.

slit your wrist....
who gives a s**t...
slit some more..
is it sore..
hit a vein... 
well thats great...
bleed some more..
laying on the floor..
close your eyes..
b***h don't cry...
hospitalized what a shame..
sitting here in the lie of loves pain <3
-Taylor

© 2011 Taylor.


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This was intense! You do a great job at captivating emotions in the moment.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Dark, short and captivating.
Something to be remembered.
And the pain is vivid, kind of an annoyence
vibrating the words, such as - "slit your wrists, who gives a s**t."
Strength mixed in anger, twisted into sadness, is how I feel from
the words you expressed, nice ending.


Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 10, 2011
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Taylor.
Taylor.

saulte ste marie, canada, Canada



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Hey, My name is Taylor. I am 15 years of age. This is my way of letting go of things I suppress. Pain, worries, ect. Thank you for reading (: more..

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I love you. I love you.

A Poem by Taylor.