Where Are You?

You said you loved me

but Dad where are you?

You said you would always be there for me

But i dont see you

You never call me on my birthday

you never call me on holidays

Dad do u even care?

do you even know anything about me?

Dad I've drawn so much blood

cried so many tears

my heart has been shattered

Dad i miss you

i love you

but do you even miss your daughter

the one you broke so many promises to

the mistake you werent there to see born

where were you ?

oh ya in jail

wasting your life on drugs and alchol

and forgeting the only one that still loves you out of all my siblings

ill cry more and more

bleed more and more

you shatter my heart more

who knew that a heart could be so broken .... <3

 

Author's Note

i think i spelt alchol wrong probly did srry

Reviews

[Rose Masen]

Wow. This is a powerful piece. It's kind of like you're asking him all of these question, rhetorically, thought you want an answer from him, you never get one. I commend you for being so strong. This piece is a real eye opener.

[J.A.N]

There is so much pain in your writing,
I could feel how much it hurts, not just because
I know how it is not to have a father around,
but because of how you expressed your feelings.

great write.
-j