Temperature Dance

The heat.. and the chills.

From hot to cold.
This temperature dance is making me weak.
Is this what I want?
Of course it is you silly girl.
You want to continue this cruel dance.
He twirls me with heat and dips me into the freezing emotion below.
You'll smile.
You'll cry.
I want him.
I need him.
May his ice never let me go.
You will dance with the man until you shatter.
he is worth it all..
I'll..Never dismiss this temperature dance.

Reviews

[Arthur Crow]

Yes full of emotion and life. Very good word choices to express the temperature of dance!

[Lydia Shutter]

Love can be a roller coaster, no doubt about it. From ice to fire......it can make a person crazy. Good emotional write. Lydi*