Not Knowing.

Part of one of my songs.

All around me the wold is so sad
Someone help me
Bring me back
To the life I once had

I tried to run but you see im not fast
Someone take me back to the past
Can't you hear that i'm screaming for you
But the problem here is I don't know who

Another day trapped in my idenity
Searching for a way out can't you see
Scratching off my skin screaming out your name
Searching for you or someone to blame, for

Not knowing who I am
Not knowing who i'm gonna be
Not knowing where I stand
Not knowing if we'll ever meet.....

Author's Note

This bit of my song, can mean what ever you'd like it to mean...To me it represents a personal event.

Reviews

[Thomas Fleet]

I don't know what it was about the ending, but the last line just made my heart thump. The vibe I get from this is clearly pain, anger and heartbreak of the sorts. Truly heartfelt and well written. It makes me feel depressed, no offense, but that's a good thing, right? Shows that you obviously did a wonderful job at conveying your feelings to the reader. Thanks for sharing.

[deeps]

I like this write, quite the powerful write
Very well written and I can feel the flow.
Very well written

[Simpleasures]

Those are nice lyrics, would love to hear the melody.

[123456789]

I really like this! Nice job!!

[X]

nice work. i expect to see more from you soon.

[Hannah]

The build up is amazing, and the last four lines are very easy to relate to. Your rhythm is amazing, there's a very nice flow to it. I love the line "Another day trapped in my identity" (There's a typo here by the way, one of the "t"s are missing), especially leading up to the "now knowing" lines. Anyway, this was an enjoyable read ^-^

[...]

Great poem. the message is one I think most people can relate to.

[LivingDeath]

Theres never a way of knowing fore sure, but you have to go off what your heart tells you, as corny as that may sound. But that not knowing if we'll ever meet, well, I'm glad we did.