Nana in the Morning

Manet's painting "Nana"

O,
to be
Manet
with Nana
on that morning
before the stroke
of brush did touch
her cheeks with blush
of immoral immortality.

6/11/14

Reviews

[RAOrourke]

well done with such a small poem. I liked this point of view never thought of the character behind the painting and how they are now immortal

[Rick r]

Thank you, RA.
rick

[W.k.kortas]

Tight and epigrammatic, doin' a whole lot with not a lot of words.

[Rick r]

Thank you, W.k. Trying to get caught up. Been writing a lot but not posting lately. Hope this finds you well.
rick