Broken-wing ruse

A Poem by Rick r

With broken wing-
She tried to fly/
A broken wing-
The ruse she tried/
On broken wing-
The sigh, it died/
For broken wing-
Her lover cried.

3/12/14

© 2014 Rick r

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John Anderson

This is quite extraordinary...

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you, John.
Rick

sonnie ibadah

it's simple but full of meaning and emotion. well penned! thanks for sharing ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Sonnie.

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Added on June 10, 2014
Last Updated on June 10, 2014

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Rick r

Sneads Ferry, NC

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Hi, I am an archaeologist by profession, a lover of books, and a father of an awesome son. Stop by and say hello. I look forward to reading your words. All comments and suggestions on my works are mos.. more..

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