Water and Ink

My description of writer's block

I close my eyes
Try to sleep
I see a wave of ink
A cloud of black
In water
No rhyme
No poem or verse
I'm going blind
I need a nurse
Breasts like cumuli
Hips as wide as a nautical mile
To get me back to sea
To help me see
To make me smile. 

5/26/14

Author's Note

A writer's block piece.

Reviews

[Brittanie]

Were you experiencing writers block when you wrote this? I'm impressed. Your word choice is what makes the poem so powerful, it's perfect for such a short piece. Nicely done. :)

[Rick r]

Thank you, and yes, I was. :) I recovered.
rick

[W.k.kortas]

I'm thinking I like your muse much better than mine.

[Rick r]

HAHAHA. Yeah, my muse comes through at times.