Night Listens to My Dreams

Night Listens to My Dreams

A Poem by Rick r
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Dreams

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Night listens to my dreams
And tells me what they mean
I dreamt the moon was blue
A wan and pallid hue
I'm told because of you

 

Dreams of sky in motion
Mirrored on the ocean
The dream it couldn't stay
The tide washed clouds away
I'm told pain comes in waves

 

I dreamt you turned to ice
The stars froze in your eyes
The shadow of the moon
Took you away too soon
I'm told love led to ruin

 

20Feb14

© 2014 Rick r


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This reads with a somber tone, yet I find it very soft and delicate in its delivery...simply lovely

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rick r

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Teeya.
Teeya

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome:)
"I dreamt the moon was blue
A wan and pallid hue
I'm told because of you"

This poem is truly beautiful. These lines became highlighted for me, very good. :)
Luna..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rick r

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Luna. This is one of my personal favorites, if I am allowed. I appreciate you.. read more
La Luna

10 Years Ago

Who wouldn't. And you are welcome.
Luna.

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Rick r
Rick r

Sneads Ferry, NC



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