The Unknowing Love

The one I love doesnt know

Even when I try to show

Day by day she doesn't notice

And shes the only one I see

If I ask her out what will happen

If she says no then i won't intervene

If she says yes I will be filled with glee

I will be there for every moment

The ups and downs the problems she face

I will try to comfort her

Even when she says i'm okay

I will listen and pay attention

Because one day ill be in need

And someone to be there

But if she ever notices me I will never know

Hopefully one day she’ll come and see

That I was there all along 

Waiting for her to be with me

Reviews

[Twizzler]

AWWWEEEE....this is so sweet! Awesome poem...beautiful sentiment.

[Shubhangi]

hey hector! its a nice poem...reader definitely gets the feelings you want to convey... keep writing...it will get better n better.

[Hector Tellez]

My first poem i hope its good