This is a very good poem about frenemies, as well as the kids people hate to love, love to hate, and yet want to be all at once- what might be called the in-crowd. I like how you established different ideas with different colors, with black signifying their general atrocities, the red emphasizing both emotion and more detailed descriptions, purple highlighting the reactions contradictory to the actions, and the blue addressing the reader.
At an age in which you are ---
in school...everyone is finding...
exploring who and what they are...
there's a possibility one gets...
caught in the mainstream...
liked how this just let's go...
seems you're venting...
and finding reassurance...
They walk among us...they are us..have been us since we perceived duality..
I like this Bri..a subject rarely breached.
Good job
100 Zombie points....
Scott
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
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