This is a very good poem about frenemies, as well as the kids people hate to love, love to hate, and yet want to be all at once- what might be called the in-crowd. I like how you established different ideas with different colors, with black signifying their general atrocities, the red emphasizing both emotion and more detailed descriptions, purple highlighting the reactions contradictory to the actions, and the blue addressing the reader.
True. Some people only pretend to be your friends and then laugh in your face when you can't see them. That's what makes it so wonderful to find a friend who doesn't do that, because without dark there can be no light and vise versa.
I like how you played the beautiful lie tune in this.
Well done!
Yes, family and friends... What gives? ha.
It doesn't seem to change when you get older I am sorry to say. Take the good with the bad and try not to do the same to your own connections in life. I just try to assume the best intention and let the rest go...
Good work on this.
This is a very good poem about frenemies, as well as the kids people hate to love, love to hate, and yet want to be all at once- what might be called the in-crowd. I like how you established different ideas with different colors, with black signifying their general atrocities, the red emphasizing both emotion and more detailed descriptions, purple highlighting the reactions contradictory to the actions, and the blue addressing the reader.
thats the life of a teenager you cant just trust easily anyone at school even though they may seem to adore you but one gets to know their reality..!! excellent write you've expressed the true situation :)
maybe they your friends all ready. and they are at your heart. we don t need to ask we need be full of love get ready for connection at rivers of hearts stay calm give them hot tea when they get sick give them
dance when they get healthy provide friendship on the base open fire at our hearts. p.s.
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