She Leaves.

She Leaves.

A Poem by Bri
"

A look into the life of having to share your best friend with enemies of a different species.

"

She graces me with a hug.

A beautiful smile on her face.

She's amazing.


Her personality is like a brilliant sun.

Shining brightly without difficulty.

Bringing a smile to your face after a rainy day.


She fills my heart with happiness as we speak of our jokes and playful banter.

She's my best friend.


She sticks to me like a wonderful glue.

A bond that is strong and almost unbreakable.


Then the other ones come along.

Their presence hangs in the air like a disgusting stench.

Making me wish to vomit and banish them but, alas.


My best friend wants them here, so

they stay.

And I do not complain,

so as to not disrupt my dear friendship.


Then, like a sudden flood upon small houses,

they take her.

And I don't see my dear best friend.


Please come back,

how I do miss you.

© 2014 Bri


Author's Note

Bri
Please tell me what you think!

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I think this is pretty darn neat...unusual subject.
Didn't expect the ending..
Very good job.....!!!!!

Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bri

10 Years Ago

Thanks, I felt like writing this in the light of my day.
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)
Scott...

2
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

745 Views
11 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on January 7, 2014
Last Updated on January 7, 2014
Tags: love, girl, best friend, friend, close, dear, straight, lol, hash tag, tag, review for review, lovely, hate sharing, sharing, enemies, hate them, love bestie, woman, girly, boys, dream, soul, fabulous

Author

Bri
Bri

Writer's City , CA



About
I try to go through all of my read requests once a week, so, please be patient with me!!! I'm an artist of all sorts. I've been writing stories since I could first hold a pe.. more..

Writing
Not That bad Not That bad

A Poem by Bri


Ch. 1 Stay Silent Ch. 1 Stay Silent

A Chapter by Bri


Ch. 2 Finally Home Ch. 2 Finally Home

A Chapter by Bri



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Inequality Inequality

A Poem by Kimmie


COSMICLOVE COSMICLOVE

A Poem by Zami Amma