She Leaves.

A look into the life of having to share your best friend with enemies of a different species.

She graces me with a hug.

A beautiful smile on her face.

She's amazing.

Her personality is like a brilliant sun.

Shining brightly without difficulty.

Bringing a smile to your face after a rainy day.

She fills my heart with happiness as we speak of our jokes and playful banter.

She's my best friend.

She sticks to me like a wonderful glue.

A bond that is strong and almost unbreakable.

Then the other ones come along.

Their presence hangs in the air like a disgusting stench.

Making me wish to vomit and banish them but, alas.

My best friend wants them here, so

they stay.

And I do not complain,

so as to not disrupt my dear friendship.

Then, like a sudden flood upon small houses,

they take her.

And I don't see my dear best friend.

Please come back,

how I do miss you.

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think!

Reviews

[devin.klose]

So Sweet. I loved it. It was almost innocent in it's image. Keep writing!

[Bluefire]

Same thing happened to me. I guess that's life.
Like a tide rising and falling, some friends are here and then gone in a flash.
I'm sorry you had to go through such a thing.
This write was beautiful, though!

[Sami Khalil]

"Her personality is like a brilliant sun.

Shining brightly without difficulty.

Bringing a smile to your face after a rainy day."

[Sylvia Chika]

Poetic expressions can paint a true picture...lovely poem!

[Gracie G]

This is really good. This is a topic that I think a lot of people can relate to. Losing a friend is never easy, and you did a lovely job of expressing the frustration, fear, and agony one feels when it happens.

[Bri]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

She fills my heart with happiness as we speak of our jokes and playful banter.

She's my best friend.

[Bri]

Yeah, I tried to describe her in a way that sounded beautiful like she is.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......

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looks you had great friend. i love how you describe her nature it s really positive. i had similute expirience when friend left for someone else. quiet painfull expirience . it s good writen like all your poems. and i love idea and messages . so please keep writing

[00000000000000000000000..]

Awww I never had but 3 best friends, The 1st left Tennessee after his Mom & Dad divorced it strip me, My next best friend passed away 4 years ago ,That killed me, Now I have one that's unreal unlike any I ever had . I wont explain it because no1 will understand , But we talk everyday , we Skype when we can. We understand each other as if she is a soul bride giggles:) She yeah I kinda get the just what that feel like having your friend taken away from you. The special thing if it ever ends or something bad happens they will know and the other will know as well in their hearts. It can be a soul sucking experience.

[Sami Khalil]

A good write...Pen on...:)...............

[Giggling Star]

I liked this very much. You have a very nice way of putting your feelings into words.