Bananas.

Bananas.

A Poem by Bri
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Ps. I love bananas! This is a little poetic exercise for my colleague and I!

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You laugh at my struggle.

You smile at my pain.

You stand there with a grin.

You're just a mean banana.


I hate bananas.

Their sweet insides.

I can't take it.

Thick with vitamins.

Full of seeds.


Cruel, evil banana.

You laugh at me with your bright yellow color.

It hurts.

I shall eat you,

little banana.


Good bye banana.

I hope to never see you again.

© 2014 Bri


Author's Note

Bri
I love bananas! This was just a poetic exercise for my colleague and I! lol. Poor bananas..

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It was pretty funny. It reminded me of my poem about rice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is cute and funny....enjoyed this.
I recently beat up a box of rice cakes...lol

Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hah, the whole time I read this I was imagining it in my sister's voice because it sounds like something she would say with complete seriousness... Thanks for putting a smile on my face at the thought. A bit quirky and odd, but that is probably why I like it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I've never met a cruel banana before but this made me smile...........

"You're" just a mean banana


Posted 10 Years Ago


I look at bananas differently now after reading this...A very good one...:)............

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lol I loved it:) and I had to laugh:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lol I love it , lol little bananas

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 4, 2014
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Bri

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