Chocolate Robots

Chocolate Robots

A Poem by Bri
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Friend and I are giving each other hard topics to make poems out of. Care to read or join us?

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Chocolate,

beautiful chocolate robots.

You fill my mind with wonder as your glass eyes make your way into my mouth.

So delicious.


You are treading on a single string.

About to enter my mouth.

About to be added to my stomach.

Are you scared?


Your glass eyes show no emotion yet,

I can feel your delightful chocolate turn sour as I bite into you.

Does it hurt?

Do you feel pain chocolate robot?


You do taste amazing.

How I wish I could eat your brothers and sisters.

For you to be united in my stomach.

To be brought together by the same frightful death.


Are you scared chocolate robot?

You should be.

© 2014 Bri


Author's Note

Bri
Please tell me what you think! (This is an experimental poetic game for my friend and I, care to join?)

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Ice
I want chocolate robots....

Posted 10 Years Ago


Interesting....very interesting wordplay and creativity makes for adorable reading. This is also excellent exercise for those with writer's block.

thanks for the share

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bri

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the review :)
Ha I've never had a chocolate robot, very cute and made me smile.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bri

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Was my pleasure.
This is wonderfully warm and cute...such a neat subject...and your delicate consumption..a delight.
Very clever...I smiled..
Kudos...

Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bri

10 Years Ago

Thank you, it was a poetic exercise between my colleague and I. Thanks for reviewing :)
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)
Scott.....
I like the personification of the robot and the fact you think you can "reunite" him with his family in your stomach. A cute concept. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bri

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your review. It was a game my colleague and I were playing, a bit of a poetic exercise.. read more
Omg I love it!!!!! Scary yet nice love it!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Bri

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