Gosh im crying, no lie I am .
its beautiful bri , the mixed emotions of love , hate, strength
sympathy , touching to the heart it was more then
intresting it was worth all my time.
ive been feeling like this for days and now I feel like I can
see agin ive been believeing wen somone tells me im
ugly but now my eyes are open. =,)
wonderful read.
sheri~
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
aww thanks sher-bear, I've sent your pic by the way. :D
*Claps* So true. I love the message. Its a very straightforward piece that rings true for everyone, whether they're the one who feels run down or the one doing the running down. It flowed well and struck home so good job!
It is not at all boring..you nailed it.
Your value is far above the whims or thoughts of others...Bravo.
The emotion came through quite well....do not be so unsure...you have talent.
I liked it.
Scott
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you, that means a lot. I'm still really new at writing poems so I wasn't really sure.
Gosh im crying, no lie I am .
its beautiful bri , the mixed emotions of love , hate, strength
sympathy , touching to the heart it was more then
intresting it was worth all my time.
ive been feeling like this for days and now I feel like I can
see agin ive been believeing wen somone tells me im
ugly but now my eyes are open. =,)
wonderful read.
sheri~
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
aww thanks sher-bear, I've sent your pic by the way. :D
I try to go through all of my read requests once a week, so, please be patient with me!!!
I'm an artist of all sorts.
I've been writing stories since I could first hold a pe.. more..