Finally A Day

Finally A Day

A Poem by ToriSchrodi
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I've had a tough couple weeks, but yesterday was actually a really good day so I felt like writing something happy :)

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Today was good.

A day full of smiles.

One of the few days where the shadows of my mind were kept at bay.


Finally a day where I did not question myself.

Nor did I question the people around me.


Finally a day where my friendships felt true.

A day when I did not question if people liked me,

Or tolerated me.


Finally a day where nobody felt the need to comment on the volume of my voice.

A day when I wasn’t too loud.

Or talking to fast.


Finally a day where my smile was true.

Not a facade used to hide my true feelings inside.

A face I use to pretend I’m not hurting


Finally a day where I didn’t feel the need to be aggressive.

So that I can hide my insecurities behind my aggression.  


Finally a day where everything seemed to be okay.

I walked the halls with my head held high

A true smile on my face.


Today was a good day.


© 2016 ToriSchrodi


Author's Note

ToriSchrodi
Please ignore grammar mistakes :)

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I liked the realistic view and story in the poetry.
"Finally a day where everything seemed to be okay.
I walked the halls with my head held high
A true smile on my face. "
I liked the above lines. Good to have a smile and know confident. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Have a good day!

This was so pleasant to read, I need to look forward for one of those days myself now.

Good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


You didn't even have to use your A.K.
We feel so 'lucky' when we get these days - days which seem to fall onto others laps like confetti at a wedding and yet we can only grasp at the dirty stained wet pieces of paper that are stuck to the pavement.
And we feel 'lucky' - as if we sneaked in, for once, under the radar of the vengeful Gods who seem determined to plague us.
You nailed it here. That 'Day' which is as rare as hen's teeth.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on November 30, 2016
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ToriSchrodi
ToriSchrodi

Dayton, OH



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