Traveler

a Senryu

In a different place

Maybe you would have loved me

We should travel there

Reviews

[Rei]

I love haikus! And this one is a perfect example. Well sorry to say but I counted the syllables to make sure and the numbers added up properly. Anyway I agree with most of these reviewers here that you captured and displayed so much emotion in so few words. It is amazing that you could create a piece we can all relate to and/or take our own interpretation from this. Thank you for writing this ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

In so few words you said so much. A beautiful poem. Those chance encounters in a life leave us wondering.
Coyote

[cest la vie]

Ina word (or two), simply beautiful..

[Jia Mekare]

This poem's like a splinter of a heartbreak, short and sharp and painful. In a well written way, that is.

[I Am THE LADY POET]

Short but filled with so much meaning. A great write :)

[Rodney Russ]

Very thoughful and deep though it comes off simplistic. It's one of those poems you should read a couple of times to fully grasp the truthfullness.

[Lena]

I like it, straight and to the point.
That place is sure to be very crowded because so many are looking for that special place where love can have a chance to make it.

[Nia Imani]

Love will make you want to travel the world to be near it and dwell with it. Lovely piece!!!!

[Lauren Xena Campbell]

What beauty lies in words, and so few. This is lovely although sad. Wonderful Senryu!

[Lillian]

O! I just felt a heart get pierced with these words. Brilliantly done.