Saviour

Patterns

She wavers between strength and fragility,

with such intensity

Why can't you just let her be?

Can't you see you're confusion and doubt

wrapped in paper

Decorated, adorned,

don't you know you can't save her?

Can't you see the whole truth?

That she can't,

that she won't

save you

Author's Note

Written a few years ago, though I wouldn't say my writing has improved much since then.

Reviews

[Ookpik]

Some really nice rhythm in this one and the imagery works really well with the theme - welcome to WritersCafe Tora! Nice to see you on here :)

[Tora]

Thanks for reading Ookpik! Glad I've finally started posting