Into the grey

Dreaming into the sinful dark.. 

someone tapped me and the colors sparked

my tears glisten while the candles shine

if i am not alone then who is mine?

Forget the s**t and start the day

A colorful shimmery gem in the (best probably) hidden tray

Burying the hidden inception.. i relied on the very present

The enchanting grace is injecting inside my veins 

But something is holding me back.. the fear of losing?

You must confront it to rejoice my lady.. someone sang to me in a whispering way

Gaze the hazel eyes.. dwell inside the excel from the good till the best

all running like a flowing stream

the magic is pulling every string of my heart making it sing with my eyes closed

oh my lord! oh my lord!

bring me a glass of wine

no bring me a bottle of wine 

ah! helplessly once more i vacillate

give me a sip more

let me drown a little more

make me forget my fears

let me dream into the grey

into the grey into the . . .sssshhh!

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Such beautiful, fierce contrasts voiced in darkness and shimmering colors... the mists of grey... There is a sorrowful tone... a longing... and yet, such strength... yes, grace flowing through your blood like rivers... Drink deep the magic, dear poet... and release its voice to us all...

[Tooba Binte Abdul Rasheed]

For sure!
Thanks a ton dear :)

[An owl on the moon]

So thankful for your poetic voice here.. a thousand blessings... :)

[BlueDreams]

An amazing write it is! :) It encompasses so much detailing which makes the poem alive ;)

[Tooba Binte Abdul Rasheed]

thank you for your awesome review :)

[BlueDreams]

My pleasure dear :)

[Daydreamer]

Very nice descriptions! I really liked it 🌹 An enjoyable read,indeed!
But I humbly suggest, on the 6th line, you put (probably hidden) between brackets instead!
Helps to keep the tone stable against the rhyme 😁

[Tooba Binte Abdul Rasheed]

thankyou manal for the positive review :) i love your suggestion

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. I liked the places you took me and your thoughts.
"give me a sip more
let me drown a little more
make me forget my fears
let me dream into the grey
into the grey into the . . .sssshhh!"
Sometime wine and drink can open us up or make us forget. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tooba Binte Abdul Rasheed]

thank you for the review Cayote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.