Yes! Where are those people? It feels like everyone is using innocent people, and it breaks my heart. What's worse, to survive, sometimes, we have to be one of those 'people' too, unless we want to get stomped on. :/ What has the world come to be? You raised very good points in your poem, and it was a pleasure to read this. Thanks for sharing! :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thanks Polly, and yes, What is it about this world and what it's come to be.
Thanks for taki.. read moreThanks Polly, and yes, What is it about this world and what it's come to be.
Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
I think differently somehow.. Maybe we are lost.. in the midst of finding who we think are lost, we have come so farther away that though those people may have returned, we can't..
This made me think.. It was a pleasure reading this..
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Some of us get lost, I'm sure, while others simply learn that they never knew what they didn't know .. read moreSome of us get lost, I'm sure, while others simply learn that they never knew what they didn't know about themselves...the beauty of growth I suppose...but sometimes, we grow (or grow apart) either from who we call acquaintances or who we thought we were...thinking differently along the way :-) Thanks for stopping by
Hello friend, it has been too long since I last dropped in. There are some beautiful lines many of which ask us to take a honest look at ourselves and the climate we live in. Consumerism is not exclusive to material possessions we use one another far too easily. Where are they now? They're still there we just have to look a little harder and soften our hearts enough to be open. Beautiful poetry. R xo
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
'Soften our hearts' ...I'm sure poems like this come out of me only because I've spent a lifetime fi.. read more'Soften our hearts' ...I'm sure poems like this come out of me only because I've spent a lifetime fighting that war (conform to / rebel against what's the norm).
Thanks for stopping by but don't sweat how frequent as I am not posting here much these days.
So nice to read your words again. Hope all is well. :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
All is well, thank you hope all is well with you. I'm not on as much either but still writing. Takin.. read moreAll is well, thank you hope all is well with you. I'm not on as much either but still writing. Taking it a little more serious actually...when I'm not distracted. :-)
Yes! Where are those people? It feels like everyone is using innocent people, and it breaks my heart. What's worse, to survive, sometimes, we have to be one of those 'people' too, unless we want to get stomped on. :/ What has the world come to be? You raised very good points in your poem, and it was a pleasure to read this. Thanks for sharing! :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thanks Polly, and yes, What is it about this world and what it's come to be.
Thanks for taki.. read moreThanks Polly, and yes, What is it about this world and what it's come to be.
Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
"I don't want to sound like I've studied writing, I want to sound like I've studied life."
As a writer I tend to be a sponge for real life experiences; drawn to passion, raw & untamed emotion and.. more..