this one is bittersweet and so romantic.. it is the secret whispers of a heart speaking truth to the longing for that one that makes it beat again... guilty pleasures for one that doesn't belong to them... it is sensual and sweet... the flow is enchanting and melts down the page dancing into the hearts of the readers with such hushed magic.. The subtle use of repetition in this one is divine... it adds power to the words and drives the piece... surprise ending that delivers the stinging little slap back to reality from this alluring dream that promises love and salvation... I have to say this is my favorite that I have read of yours so far... awesome piece...
Oooh la la, this one blew my skirt up Antonyo! The 'constant beast of dark and silence raging'...are you kidding me? Now that's hot...a sultry dance of longing...love the format too, it's all stellar!
"I don't want to sound like I've studied writing, I want to sound like I've studied life."
As a writer I tend to be a sponge for real life experiences; drawn to passion, raw & untamed emotion and.. more..