Dreams of Someday

Dreams of Someday

A Poem by Antoñyo

       

© 2019 Antoñyo


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this one is bittersweet and so romantic.. it is the secret whispers of a heart speaking truth to the longing for that one that makes it beat again... guilty pleasures for one that doesn't belong to them... it is sensual and sweet... the flow is enchanting and melts down the page dancing into the hearts of the readers with such hushed magic.. The subtle use of repetition in this one is divine... it adds power to the words and drives the piece... surprise ending that delivers the stinging little slap back to reality from this alluring dream that promises love and salvation... I have to say this is my favorite that I have read of yours so far... awesome piece...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Oooh la la, this one blew my skirt up Antonyo! The 'constant beast of dark and silence raging'...are you kidding me? Now that's hot...a sultry dance of longing...love the format too, it's all stellar!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Antoñyo

10 Years Ago

Ah, thanks for the "inspiring" review :-)

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Added on July 23, 2014
Last Updated on February 26, 2019
Tags: romance, kiss, missing, someday, longing, forbidden love, dream, far away

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Antoñyo
Antoñyo

City of Angels and Rams, CA



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