Stronger Than Pride

i really don't feel like describing my poems leaving them for the audience to decide, or for them to enjoy,

can share shelters 

bites protecting what should be free 

pillow where i cannot disguise 

shadow till the lie 

lie 

shelter me 

dropped from the punch 

you’ll get a miracle 

same voices we’ve heard 

cause they weigh properly 

oakwood in bixby knolls 

oakwood by pacific hospital 

figure out which i attended 

Author's Note

you can review it however you want to

Reviews

[Farah Husain]

I love the way you use your words.

[Anthony Medina]

thank you ma'am, i may post another one of my pieces, im new to this website, im searching for a publisher, i use my tumblr blog for my poetry.

[Farah Husain]

you can always self publish on lulu.com like it says here. I used to do that for my students.

[LM]

Interesting choice of words. I like your flow and your expression of creativity. But what were you trying to communicate? Is it a riddle? Or is it just words in a cloud?

[Anthony Medina]

my aesthetic is one where i craft my poems as paintings, leaving the poem up to whomever reads it,

[LM]

True, but my question is not concerning the audience. I'm addressing the artist. lol =)