BY JESSE For Maggie

BY JESSE For Maggie

A Poem by Revolutionary
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MY 7 YR OLD wrote this

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I  love you maggie
because you never bite
your cuddly
and you always treat me nice.

I like it when
you do tricks for treats
like when you smile
or lay at my feet

I love you maggie again
because your my best friend.

© 2010 Revolutionary


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This is a great poem. It is very cute and innocent. It is incredible that it was written by a seven-year old. Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have four children. They love their pets. Poem is beautiful. Simple words create a beautiful vision of child and animal. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Baz
A 7-year old wrote this? Seriously? I have to say that its very good considering the age. Better than many works published by grown up writers in this site, in my opinion. My writing passion is childrens poems, so I really hope that your 7-year old keeps it up. Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 22, 2010
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Revolutionary
Revolutionary

hale, MI



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