America

America

A Poem by Revolutionary
"

this is a song in the works I do not think it is finished yet.Help me decide

"

They say that country musics still alive in Nashville
Try the gumbo down in New Orleans
You can still have a new York moment
from Manhattan on out to Queens.
You  can ride white waves of snow through Colorado
as far as the eye can see.
The sun still shines in California
down on a sandy beach.

Ain't that America,
The home of the free
The land of the brave
where dreams are made
for you and me
Ain't that America
You know she's something to see
From the canyons to the mountains
The rivers to the oceans
The forest full of trees

I was born in the Tennessee Valley
I will always be a country girl
cause them folks on Printers Alley
produce the best music in the world.
I was raised on the constitution
taught my right to raise my voice
revaluation is the only solution
these politicians don't give us much choice

They are destroying our foundation
They are robbing us of our rights
Alienating an entire nation
The entire nation has to join this fight
When I see folks stand together
strong will hand in hand
I can feel the Amber Waves
as they roll across this land

And we take back America
the land of the free
the home of the brave
where dreams are made
for you and me
It's time to take back America
And keep our liberty 
lets do it for the children
lets do it for civilians
lets do it for the free

© 2011 Revolutionary


Author's Note

Revolutionary
I don't think it is done but I am scared to add more.Does it feel finished to you?

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Scared to add more? If you're even considering adding more you ought to.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A very patriotic write, Revolutionary! I sounds done to me.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well expressed. you put this together beautifully. loved the way you flow... great message. keep that pen hot :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 8, 2010
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Revolutionary

hale, MI



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