Suddenly human!

I would like you to describe it. Would you? Could you?

Exploded into atoms, but not yet disembarked 

by the time time realizes it's mistake

dogs will have heard the bark;

Eyes flooded, righteously won't stay afloat 

Many a wicked sin, a misanthropic can unload

upon an impersonal island of pseudo bliss

in-activeness in the organs of forced dismiss

can the force of humanness not excel in these waters?

equal the fight with tiny cats and mice alike giving quarters

to hope proclaimed as destiny, swallowing the compromising bite

alast the explosion would rest in me, time to do some right

Author's Note

Any and all feedback and comments are welcome. Never shared any of my poems before, I would say be gentle, but I would rather say be honest. If it speaks to you, speak to me.

Reviews

[keatsgb]

Tony, thanks for sharing your poem. It is complex but really thought provoking