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Saddened

Saddened

A Poem by Tony Jordan
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Reporting an unbelievable inhuman attack on a donkey

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The whole village repulsed
Parents deeply ashamed 
"How could this be true? Our child...?"
Rabies contracted - god help the rabies!

Only the donkey was put down.

© 2017 Tony Jordan


Author's Note

Tony Jordan
http://www.deccanchronicle.com/lifestyle/viral-and-trending/160817/fifteen-teenagers-get-rabies-after-raping-donkey.html

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The topic at hand is quite mind-blowing! We here in the boondocks have a running joke about this particular pastime, but I thought it was only a joke! Your poem is nicely sarcastic & could be a metaphor for all the ways a victim gets blamed! *sheesh!* (((HUGS)))

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I like the way you look at this with the broader perspective BG. I felt ashamed for those parents of.. read more
Carol Cashes

7 Years Ago

I'm with barleygirl - this is the epitome of victim blaming.



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Regardless of whether these events are indeed true and not just some sicko's idea of a bad joke and jumping on the fake news bandwagon, then you have done the donkey proud my friend. We live in a sad old world to be sure

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I would never want to be reincarnated as a donkey - surely the most put upon little working animal o.. read more
Tragic and profoundly sad.
"Pieces of a*s" comes to mind but I have neither the heart, nor the stomach, to complete such a "joke."
Thoroughly depraved behavior!--the sort that once brought on "The Great Flood!"

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

We used to knock doors and run for kicks but this is more than just 'horse-play' eh Jimmy?
Th.. read more
Thanks for this uplifting start to my day of rest Tony! Perhaps in some parallel universe fifteen donkeys might be exacting revenge.
Cheers,
Alan

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Well if they are - I hope they 'burro' a big hole in der 'asses.'
Thank you Alan.
O.M.G. Out of such an incredibly horrible story you have managed to write a powerful statement of victim blaming. I am without any more words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Blame the victim....always happens, doesn't it? Sort of a gross premise in this one, but you get the point across well. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


Raping a rabid donkey is about as hard-up as any human can get.
Still, the donkey may have been slumming.
God save us!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

black humour is the only way we can process this Frank, for definite. I'm sure a few of them will be.. read more
The topic at hand is quite mind-blowing! We here in the boondocks have a running joke about this particular pastime, but I thought it was only a joke! Your poem is nicely sarcastic & could be a metaphor for all the ways a victim gets blamed! *sheesh!* (((HUGS)))

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I like the way you look at this with the broader perspective BG. I felt ashamed for those parents of.. read more
Carol Cashes

7 Years Ago

I'm with barleygirl - this is the epitome of victim blaming.
A truly unbelievable tale told with a tongue-in-cheek ending with a sense of pathos!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Damn John - how could kids even contemplate such a vile act...although we've seen what kids are capa.. read more
John Alexander McFadyen

7 Years Ago

Just back from Mull where we were treated to the proverbial dreich week!
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Aww mate...lol
The local DJ on the radio said 'it so wet that even the ducks are gurning' (i... read more
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S**t! Is that true?!!

Lost for words! As an Equine Scientist i am laughing it up with my Equus pals!



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Sadly it's all too true.
If there had been a chimera the better parts would have been equine.. read more
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7 Years Ago

Was the brothel closed for renovations??!

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Added on August 17, 2017
Last Updated on August 19, 2017
Tags: animal cruelty, teenagers, rabies, sick f*cks

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Tony Jordan
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