Seeing Double

It was inspired by seeing 'heavy petting' in another review. Just some fun with words

I really want to 

love love

But I usually only

desire desire

I often pet heavily 

but not my pet

I would like to 

sex up sex (boo missionaries!)

I truly aspire to 

feel feelings

*thinking*

*thinking*

...how the heck can I close 

this...this... 

cr*p?

;P

Author's Note

not to be taken ~ seriously ~ twice a day before meals

Captcha - dysbulic - means incomparable - lmao xD

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

Ok, sometimes, we just have to be a bit silly. But WHAT FUN! I shall definitely be taking that twice a day before meals.

[Tony Jordan]

I love playing with the meaning of words. Thank you for joining in Astri.
:D

[AcasualPawn]

Good work

I really want to
love
But I usually only
desire
I would like to
sex up sex (boo missionaries!)
I often pet heavily
but not my pet
I truly aspire to
feel feelings
*thinking*
*thinking*
...how the heck can I close
this...this...

cr*p?

;P

Sorry

[Tony Jordan]

Thanks DP. why Sorry?

[AcasualPawn]

Nothing.:}

[Norman 223]

re your last lines, Tony..... see an opthalmographer about your poetic diplopia. Then re-write...right! :-D
Loved the way you can transform verbs to adjectives to nouns. Definitely dysbulic ..

[Tony Jordan]

lol - I have been given tablets and specs Norman. Now I'm seeing triple !! Thank you very much for the craic. (That goes to the Norman in the middle)

[AprilRN1210]

Seems like a dose of silliness was added in. Ha! One of the times I am not sure what to say, so will leave you with its effect: me, shaking my head at iPad and giggling :)

[Tony Jordan]

Aaaaprilllll !! :)))
so good to see you back on WC.
This is pure silly, yes, haha.read moreAaaaprilllll !! :)))
so good to see you back on WC.
This is pure silly, yes, haha.
Thank you for making stop at one of mines.
WC royalty (in my book anyhow)

[Tony Jordan]

as you can see the 'read more' glitch is alive and well. What I did say was Thank you. It's great to have WC royalty (in my book at least) on my page.

[AprilRN1210]

Lots of glitches still here, but appreciate the fact that old friends remain as well :) thank you and hardly royalty :P

[Paul Bell]

Never search for love, love. It will come to you, you.
Though me thinks it should be, love, love, love. Cos the lawyer always sends you letters in triplicate.
Is that just me being cynical. No,no,no.

[Tony Jordan]

Thanks Paul. I appreciate your words. I agree - and it makes sense internally that love will come to me, me.
The Beatles sang 'love, love, love...' in love is all you need and they had loads of dealing with solicitors so you might be onto something there.
Maybe a 'Love-prenup' is recommended.
Cheers mate
:)

[barleygirl]

This is so funny & playful & tricky & startling! I love the way you repeat words to show the "double vision" theme. I love the way your message migrates from love to heavy petting to WHATEVER! (This is the part where the door is closed on the cameraman). Your uninhibited wordplay is inspiring! *smile*

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you BG. I always remember the first time I saw the term 'heavy petting' in the swimming pool on a board of 'DO NOTs' and my innocent mind couldn't work out how people possibly 'petted' other people. lol.

[barleygirl]

Hilarious! I had eight older sisters & brothers, so I derived my knowledge of the birds & bees by spying *wink! wink!* (((HUGS)))

[Ken Simm.]

Oh that is what that means. I wondered. I thought it had something to do with St Bernard dogs.

[Tony Jordan]

Stan Laurel and the pillow. Class!! lol
Nice one Ken

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Tough deal, Tony. Methinks you've gone soft if you really want to take up "love love" hahah :P

[Tony Jordan]

Hmm...you maybe onto something there. I have been told by someone that I thought I was in love with - that I was "in love with the concept of love"
Heck - loving a concept might be better than the real deal. Concepts don't break your heart *sobs*
;p

[Tony Jordan]

I also had a love who broke my liver. (nearly)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Lol I think it's even worse ;P you get infatuated with the idea of being in love and then keep falling over and maybe then it doesn't really matter who you love lol
I think when that concpetual bubble bursts, it does breaks one's heart *sobs harder*

lmao

[Tony Jordan]

I agree. We try so hard to understand what love is then we try to find it based on that (probably very flawed) notion of love. No wonder so many confuse physical yearnings with love. At least those are basic enough to understand. e.g. "She looks like my mum. I must have sex with her!"
okay...that was just to see if you were paying attention lmao. Though it happened to Oedipus apparently.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

lmao I was 'mum' until the word 'mum' came haha :P
I think you're right. Confusing love with desire is what we find easy lol and it doesn't really take an effort except from the obvious iykwim :P ;P

[Jimmy Yetts]

That first stanza typifies the human male--at least, for a very long time, this human male.
Once, I could fashion passion but never just scrap the crap and see fit to commit.
Now, I miss fashioning that passion.
"Seeing Double" is clever fun!

[Tony Jordan]

Lol - I like this review very much Jimmy. Thank you.