Seeing Double

It was inspired by seeing 'heavy petting' in another review. Just some fun with words

I really want to 

love love

But I usually only

desire desire

I often pet heavily 

but not my pet

I would like to 

sex up sex (boo missionaries!)

I truly aspire to 

feel feelings

*thinking*

*thinking*

...how the heck can I close 

this...this... 

cr*p?

;P

Author's Note

not to be taken ~ seriously ~ twice a day before meals

Captcha - dysbulic - means incomparable - lmao xD

Reviews

[Daisy]

Hahaha my favorite! So funny, nice word play! Rock on man, rock on.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nice bit of humor to brighten another dull summer day Tony!

[Tony Jordan]

The dullness is giving way to the last remnants of Gert waving her skirt here John.
Cheers pal !

[FJ Davis]

A bit of clever light fare.
Welcomed.

[Tony Jordan]

I'm glad you liked this one FJ.
Thanks for dropping in my friend

[alanwgraham]

What a hoot! There is no deep meaning to puzzle over - just a witty bit of fun.
Well done Tony.
Cheers,
Alan

[Tony Jordan]

Words are wee toys - sometimes - Alan as you well know mate :)

[apennylate]

Hah... I often pet heavily... But not my pet... I would like to sexy up sexy time... Aha... You are hilarious, mate...

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you my friend
Where did you disappear to?

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Clever. Clever! Droll and great word-play. Have you been eating radishes? They are said to 'repeat' on a person.Great. Great! :D

[Tony Jordan]

Haha @ 'Clever. Clever' Annette. I see what you did there lol.
I get heartburn reading the word radish...haha
Thank you for visiting - come again my friend
:)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

A stuttering life full of 'want after' experiences - gleefully penned in expressive prose! :-) PS the verb for crap is: to talk at length in a foolish or boring way - but your neat write shows none of this ... have a nice day!

[Tony Jordan]

My what fun Phill. Danke. lmao
have your own nice day dear friend
:D

[Alisa Js]

Hello Tony,

What a fun read... cute play on words... I wonder how many others out there can absolutely relate to this, although your piece was written 'tongue-in-cheek" as they say, Whoever.. 'they' are...

lol

Thanks for sharing,

Alisa ;-)

[Tony Jordan]

I always found words to be fun and not a chore (unlike most of my friends/peers Im sad to say).
read moreI always found words to be fun and not a chore (unlike most of my friends/peers Im sad to say).
Thank you so much for dropping in - great to see you dear Alisa.

[Alisa Js]

lol


Very true, my friend.. words have meanings...

and that's the best part of all.

wishing you well.

Alisa

[LaMarcus Childrous]

Unique style, very good it opens up creativity. I'm new to this site and I'm just now starting to navigate.

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you, welcome and good luck LaMarcus
:)

[Destiny_Brown]

even though you say its not to be taken seriously... I like this a lot. Goes with the idea that people love the idea of being in love and end up using others for their own unfulfilled self yearnings...at least thats how i interpreted it...haha that captcha tho

[Tony Jordan]

Since there is no 'once-size-fits-all' love out there I guess we are all guilty of using others until 'The One' comes along.
Yeah...gotta love capchta
Thank you Destiny