That neb

A collaboration with another WC poet. Her words were lame so I'll credit her with the full stops only. Thank you for reading.

Tis a true and classic neb

A surgeon must have done it

But you say no - naturally.

I love the broad bridge

The semi-flared nostrils

like open arms

for each new breath.

I have never seen you blow 

that neb.

Once when I was being impatient

you scolded me with the words

"I wonder would you

Suck my neb until 

the pub opens!"

Those words told me that 

you love me.

Author's Note

This is an April fool joke
p.s. 'neb' is slang for nose

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

hahahaha I'm sure that writer would be super pleased with having the credits of full stops ;) ;p
I feel full stops are the most important part of writing poetry :p ;p
This is way too cool, Tony!
The last lines seems like you're too sure sure of yourself lol She might hate you ;p
Oh btw.. this is a good april fool poem. :)
Shall I say.. well done, you both!! ;p

[Tony Jordan]

Full stops aren't as important after all, I've decided so I'll take all the credit. Empty stops is what counts.!!
Thank you Yumna. Glad you liked this one
;p

[Dr. YumnaKay]

No give at least the credit of inspiration Tony! you didn't come up with the idea of the nose, did you? ;p
You're welcome Always :) This is my favourite! I'll read it whenever I'm down lol :p

[Ardra]

Seriously tony yuck hahahh....god...ycuk yuck
I want to puke lol

[Tony Jordan]

Hahah - relax Ria it's just a saying. Nobody actually did it (afaik) lmao...
Haha your reaction is priceless!
xD

[Ardra]

Heheh you come with all disgusting stuff
Can't help react :p

[Kesha]

Haha this is quite hilarious, I liked the jab this one delivers. Brilliantly woven!

[Tony Jordan]

This is a complete wind-up ahsek - for April Fools day. Thanks for laughing along. :D