For YumnaKay - Thank you

For YumnaKay - Thank you

A Poem by Tony Jordan
"

There are those who have the blood of altruism rushing through them...

"
A pat on the back
just as your energy is flagging
in a race which you are both running
Or a whisper in your ear, which makes you
lift your face to the wind 
When a task ahead is dreaded
A smile from across the room
which lifts weights from you
When your head is lowering
A hand touching your arm
when you felt as if you might float
in the void on a zephyr of sadness
Or a joke without malice
which says much more than the 
sum of it's words
Sometimes the smallest gesture
Can mean the world...

© 2017 Tony Jordan


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A very nice, well-worded tribute. It leaves a soft and sweet feeling in the reader. "on a zephyr of sadness", that's an epic line.

I'm glad you find such goods words for her. This is def a good support, encouragement and strength provider.

You two are somehow cute in your ways of friendship. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Thank you Βανέ.
I'm beginning to like the attention I get from other writers whenever I .. read more
V

7 Years Ago

That's expressed very lovely. You're welcome.



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Gee
Oh I see, where's "For Gee " and I don't mean the mobile network thingy.
Morning captain, hope all is well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

If I started to pen a For Gee I'd probably ruin this laptop with tears big lad.

I'm .. read more
Gee

7 Years Ago

All is fine and dandy thanks
Tony, I love this gesture of yours to your friend. Ohh my..this really is shooting up my emotions. Love to both of you...Bless!!

PS: I also love the sweet exchange of words between you, though I could hardly make anything out of it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww, this is so sweet! A lovely write, TJ! It seems you and Yumna have a strong connection :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Giulia King

7 Years Ago

I have deep respect for her too :) She's an amazing girl. She'll be so happy when she wakes up and r.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Hahaha yeah Gullia you made the start of my day! Thank you! 💜
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

And TJ, so big a heart, I think it'll explode one day lol 😂😂😂
Yes, this is so true. No one knows how much a smile or an "atta boy" means to another person. Why not always be complimentary and kind? Yumna Kay must be a wonderful lady. More people should be like her. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

So true Lydia.
She is a remarkable woman.
Thank you so much for reviewing this one m.. read more
The best journeys are the ones we don't have to walk alone. I'm always relieved to find also, that when I'm faced with a task, even if it's one as simple as getting out of bed on a rough day, I just know that I've got people around me who have my back and want to help support me when I need it. And of course, I love being supportive to my friends as well. Great tribute T

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Theyre worth more than any material wealth and your humble gratitude for having them leaps off the s.. read more
There are no truly "small" kindnesses.
Thank you, Tony, for so eloquently reminding us!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

and as you know it is so rewarding to be kind my friend. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this.. read more
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

It saddens me very much to see your profile closed Jimmy. I hope you're well and will return soon..... read more
yes, the simplest gestures can have the most meaning...and knowing friends are watching our backs...precious.
j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Very well said Jacob.
Thank you.
:)
A beautifully warm tribute to friendship
'In the void on a zephyr of sadness' what a line!

Nicely done. R xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked this Rach.
Hope you're well.
Thank you for stopping by
:)
That sounds like a clearly dedicated friendship. The last two lines are true enough in this world.

It's a very nice and genuine "tribute" to a friend.

Very sweet, Onion Face! ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Thanks my friend. Yes she's a decent spud is our Yumna as we say here.
I appreciate your thou.. read more
Lovecraft

7 Years Ago

I appreciate your humor, very amusing, lol.
"A hand touching your arm
when you felt as if you might float
in the void on a zephyr of sadness"

...all too many times! Wow, what a friend you are to acknowledge such a depth of emotion! I thought it was the onion [ your avatar ] that was making me tear up - but it's you! x

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I'm gonna return that Wow - for this awesome review my friend - thank you. x

p.s. The.. read more

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