Stoopid in love

Stoopid in love

A Poem by Tony Jordan
"

love scrambles the brain...

"
I would swim the 
9 oceans of the world 
to see your smile 
with my own eyes
 
The 7 continents 
- sure they would hold 
no challenge I'd 
trek them all - bare foot !! 
for a single kiss from you
I'd pick up a keepsake 
at each of the 
10 wonders of the world
For your trinket box
Pick a colour from 
the rainbow and I
promise it shall be 
yours forever
I would give 
both my right arms 
just to hold 
your hand
...so here I am on this 
the 15th of February 
to wish you 
Happy Valentines

© 2017 Tony Jordan


Author's Note

Tony Jordan
captcha = twaddell - damn you captcha you old unromantic !!

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Aloha Tony,

... and Happy Valentine's Day from this side of the Pacific.

I enjoyed this one as it was spoken as a true romantic soul... very sweet, very endearing... and adorable on top of everything.

Thanks for sharing this one with us out here...

Alisa ;-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Aloha Alisa
Happy belated from the UK.
I'm glad you enjoyed this one my friend.
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Alisa Js

7 Years Ago

Same to you, from across the way...

Sending you smiles across the miles... ;-) :-)<.. read more



Reviews

Smiling at your convoluted mind: the romantic battling with the jester, both vying for supremacy. No comment as to my thoughts on the winner but applause for trying hard!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I think various things were at play here Em.
A song by Jamiroquai called 'Love foolosophy', .. read more
A troubadours song to his layde from an unrepentant romantic.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Thank you my friend. I appreciate your visits and your thoughts and your Doodahs..."ma-a-a-a-a-tron-.. read more
Aloha Tony,

... and Happy Valentine's Day from this side of the Pacific.

I enjoyed this one as it was spoken as a true romantic soul... very sweet, very endearing... and adorable on top of everything.

Thanks for sharing this one with us out here...

Alisa ;-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Aloha Alisa
Happy belated from the UK.
I'm glad you enjoyed this one my friend.
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Alisa Js

7 Years Ago

Same to you, from across the way...

Sending you smiles across the miles... ;-) :-)<.. read more
AWWWWWW TONY!!! I would love it if you swam to me!! ;) hahah :D but no no..this is beautiful. I literally said "aw" outloud and my mother came in like...what are you reading? Very well written my friend. xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Well I hope you had your bra on and topped with something else ;DD
Aww..thanks Kat. I appreci.. read more
It is quite true, Tony, that being in love never made anyone smart--except in the painful sense.
Entertaining read!

Posted 7 Years Ago


But here you are a day late!!!!!!!!!!! Today is special to me as it was my mother's birthday, the original Valentine. Happy Valentines Day Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Lol - yes - the original bungling lover boy that's me.

Happy Valentines both Valentin.. read more
That's one romantic fellow.
Love can make us do all sorts of stoooopid things.
Having said that, every thing seems possible once your are in love

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Haha - I love your take on this one Shabeeh.
Yes, very well said - with their wind beneath ou.. read more
Lol. Need I say you are late!! Tired after swimming 9 oceans ;)

Loved the poem though...it's amazing just like all your writing sweet Tony.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Haha just a little tired after all that exertion my dear DIVYA lol.
You're comments always ma.. read more
Ayvid N

7 Years Ago

Sadly, the day was uneventful and got snuffed out almost prematurely. Glad I could bring on a smile... read more
Though I don't really believe in celebrating valentine's day, but this one here..it sure is an awesome love poem.. Although the contents rather made me chuckle lol but I loved the feel of it :p

You can be charming too when you want to, Tony ;)

"I would give
both my right arms
just to hold
your hand"
These lines touched my heart :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I guess you're a big softy at heart Yumna, eh?
This one is quite daft but so is love, righ.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Nah the exact opposite, TJ ;)
I agree, love makes us do stupid things ;p
You're welcom.. read more
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Ditto
Lol

xDD
i was worried, but i knew by the end you would get out of the mush! nothing says love like belated. good job, i like the both right arms part. good again!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Thank you very mush lol.
It's only once a year M. P.
I promise to play in the dark .. read more

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Added on February 13, 2017
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Tony Jordan
Tony Jordan

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