Stoopid in love

love scrambles the brain...

I would swim the 

9 oceans of the world 

to see your smile 

with my own eyes

 

The 7 continents 

- sure they would hold 

no challenge I'd 

trek them all - bare foot !! 

for a single kiss from you

I'd pick up a keepsake 

at each of the 

10 wonders of the world

For your trinket box

Pick a colour from 

the rainbow and I

promise it shall be 

yours forever

I would give 

both my right arms 

just to hold 

your hand

...so here I am on this 

the 15th of February 

to wish you 

Happy Valentines

Author's Note

captcha = twaddell - damn you captcha you old unromantic !!

Reviews

[Alisa Js]

Aloha Tony,

... and Happy Valentine's Day from this side of the Pacific.

I enjoyed this one as it was spoken as a true romantic soul... very sweet, very endearing... and adorable on top of everything.

Thanks for sharing this one with us out here...

Alisa ;-)

[Tony Jordan]

Aloha Alisa
Happy belated from the UK.
I'm glad you enjoyed this one my friend.
All the best...
:))

[Alisa Js]

Same to you, from across the way...

Sending you smiles across the miles... ;-) :-)

Alisa

[emmajoy]

Smiling at your convoluted mind: the romantic battling with the jester, both vying for supremacy. No comment as to my thoughts on the winner but applause for trying hard!!

[Tony Jordan]

I think various things were at play here Em.
A song by Jamiroquai called 'Love foolosophy', recollections of my own disasters in realm of romance, and the little fool who sang 'Don't laugh at me cause I'm a fool' (Norman Wisdom).
Thank you for sitting on the fence or at least 'taking the fifth' on this one - lol.
xD

[Ken Simm.]

A troubadours song to his layde from an unrepentant romantic.

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate your visits and your thoughts and your Doodahs..."ma-a-a-a-a-tron-n-n"

[Kathryn Smith]

AWWWWWW TONY!!! I would love it if you swam to me!! ;) hahah :D but no no..this is beautiful. I literally said "aw" outloud and my mother came in like...what are you reading? Very well written my friend. xo

[Tony Jordan]

Well I hope you had your bra on and topped with something else ;DD
Aww..thanks Kat. I appreciate this very much.
:))

[Jimmy Yetts]

It is quite true, Tony, that being in love never made anyone smart--except in the painful sense.
Entertaining read!

[Valentine]

But here you are a day late!!!!!!!!!!! Today is special to me as it was my mother's birthday, the original Valentine. Happy Valentines Day Valentine

[Tony Jordan]

Lol - yes - the original bungling lover boy that's me.

Happy Valentines both Valentines !!
(hugs)

[Shabeeh Haider]

That's one romantic fellow.
Love can make us do all sorts of stoooopid things.
Having said that, every thing seems possible once your are in love

[Tony Jordan]

Haha - I love your take on this one Shabeeh.
Yes, very well said - with their wind beneath our wings we believe are capable of all things.
Thank you, I appreciate your thoughts my friend
:)

[AYVID N]

Lol. Need I say you are late!! Tired after swimming 9 oceans ;)

Loved the poem though...it's amazing just like all your writing sweet Tony.

[Tony Jordan]

Haha just a little tired after all that exertion my dear DIVYA lol.
You're comments always make me smile - you are deeply appreciated. :))
How is Valentines treating you - well I hope.
:)

[AYVID N]

Sadly, the day was uneventful and got snuffed out almost prematurely. Glad I could bring on a smile. So keep smiling dear Tony and keep writing.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Though I don't really believe in celebrating valentine's day, but this one here..it sure is an awesome love poem.. Although the contents rather made me chuckle lol but I loved the feel of it :p

You can be charming too when you want to, Tony ;)

"I would give
both my right arms
just to hold
your hand"
These lines touched my heart :)

[Tony Jordan]

I guess you're a big softy at heart Yumna, eh?
This one is quite daft but so is love, right?
Thank you for gracing my poem pages my friend.
Happy Valentine's Day!!
>Mwah<
:D

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Nah the exact opposite, TJ ;)
I agree, love makes us do stupid things ;p
You're welcome! Always feels good when I understand some of your write-ups :p

[Tony Jordan]

Ditto
Lol

xDD

[mercy party]

i was worried, but i knew by the end you would get out of the mush! nothing says love like belated. good job, i like the both right arms part. good again!

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you very mush lol.
It's only once a year M. P.
I promise to play in the dark park for a while when Vals Day is done.
Thank you my friend.
Happy Valentine's