... and Happy Valentine's Day from this side of the Pacific.
I enjoyed this one as it was spoken as a true romantic soul... very sweet, very endearing... and adorable on top of everything.
Thanks for sharing this one with us out here...
Alisa ;-)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Aloha Alisa
Happy belated from the UK.
I'm glad you enjoyed this one my friend.
.. read moreAloha Alisa
Happy belated from the UK.
I'm glad you enjoyed this one my friend.
All the best...
:))
7 Years Ago
Same to you, from across the way...
Sending you smiles across the miles... ;-) :-)<.. read moreSame to you, from across the way...
Honestly this is adorable. It shows how much some people will do when they are 'stoopid' in love. Maybe I'm just a cheesy romantic, but still. Adorable poem.
This is one innocent and cute poem, Tony :-)
Love is such feeling that can fight out hundreds of hurdles to be with that loved one. True love gets embraced in every part of our soul.
Emotions have been conveyed very beautifully through this write.
As always very nicely written, TJ.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
I agree 100% - this is a great poem - haha joking, just doing a Trump there.
I agree 100% th.. read moreI agree 100% - this is a great poem - haha joking, just doing a Trump there.
I agree 100% that true love affects our whole being - for the better because it's a transcending experience.
Your too kind Gorthi, thank you.
:)
7 Years Ago
Every poem that is written from heart is a great poem, Tony. So this is indeed a great poem.
.. read moreEvery poem that is written from heart is a great poem, Tony. So this is indeed a great poem.
And you are welcome :-)
Very nice and very romantic poem. Hope u had a good valentine.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Oh he did....psssst, he went on a date with 2 beautiful Russian women, Iva Vulva and Soav Eye. They .. read moreOh he did....psssst, he went on a date with 2 beautiful Russian women, Iva Vulva and Soav Eye. They went to a lil' Eyetalian place, ate and drank into the early hours and then finished the date of with a menagerie st twoi. He keeps rattling on about it still. Please don't let on you know.
No I didn't. I had a bloody awful one.
Ana left and I feel responsible again ! but I am not .. read moreNo I didn't. I had a bloody awful one.
Ana left and I feel responsible again ! but I am not this time but I was made to feel that it was my fault. What makes women tick Manasa.L ??
Arrrgh !!!
Oh thank you for reviewing by the way !
7 Years Ago
I don't know I am not used to this girly thing coz I do accept people as they are. Not interested in.. read moreI don't know I am not used to this girly thing coz I do accept people as they are. Not interested in fancy talks. But maybe if you try and understand her probably you might get her back.
And you are welcome.
I came to offer a review in return for the two you left me (so I'm a cheapskate).
Love the author's note about the captcha.
I usually don't review poems because, well, I just don't get poetry, but I'll take a hack.
This poem belongs on a Paper Moon Graphics Valentine's day card. Like many men, I hate hyperbole. This poem takes a Tina Turner "Rivers Deep – Mountain High" turn straddling seriousness, but the sixth stanza (are those called stanzas in this poetic form?) sheds plausibility and forced involuntary stifled chortles. Title and text united, hyperbole morphs to good natured humor and your Valentine's day after poem entertains. Well done.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
It was all as you said Chopstix.
The guy is clueless and hapless and lots of other 'less-es' .. read moreIt was all as you said Chopstix.
The guy is clueless and hapless and lots of other 'less-es' and gets it wrong all the time while trying to do right.
Thank you for reviewing this one.
:)
Smiling here...a day late and a dollar short, Tony! Filled with all the romantic euphemisms and still unique. I enjoyed it. Lydi**
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
I guess it could be based on fact if you consider my first Valentines rose was delivered on a bicycl.. read moreI guess it could be based on fact if you consider my first Valentines rose was delivered on a bicycle and the rose in the fancy clear tube with ribbon got caught in my front wheel. Just at that moment the intended recipient emerged from her house. It was so cringey that my cringe glands are flaring up even now 36 years later thinking of it.
Thanks Lydia. :))
I can laugh about it Lydia.
I'm sure other guys have had much worse experiences lol.
7 Years Ago
We all had horrible experiences with young love....I think it makes us stronger.
7 Years Ago
It makes us pay for delivery instead of using bicycles to get flowers to them...lol
naw.. Im .. read moreIt makes us pay for delivery instead of using bicycles to get flowers to them...lol
naw.. Im kidding...it does indeed make us stronger my friend, well said. :)
Just writing to get it out
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