Stoopid in love

Stoopid in love

A Poem by Tony Jordan
"

love scrambles the brain...

"
I would swim the 
9 oceans of the world 
to see your smile 
with my own eyes
 
The 7 continents 
- sure they would hold 
no challenge I'd 
trek them all - bare foot !! 
for a single kiss from you
I'd pick up a keepsake 
at each of the 
10 wonders of the world
For your trinket box
Pick a colour from 
the rainbow and I
promise it shall be 
yours forever
I would give 
both my right arms 
just to hold 
your hand
...so here I am on this 
the 15th of February 
to wish you 
Happy Valentines

© 2017 Tony Jordan


Author's Note

Tony Jordan
captcha = twaddell - damn you captcha you old unromantic !!

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Aloha Tony,

... and Happy Valentine's Day from this side of the Pacific.

I enjoyed this one as it was spoken as a true romantic soul... very sweet, very endearing... and adorable on top of everything.

Thanks for sharing this one with us out here...

Alisa ;-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Aloha Alisa
Happy belated from the UK.
I'm glad you enjoyed this one my friend.
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Alisa Js

7 Years Ago

Same to you, from across the way...

Sending you smiles across the miles... ;-) :-)<.. read more



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Honestly this is adorable. It shows how much some people will do when they are 'stoopid' in love. Maybe I'm just a cheesy romantic, but still. Adorable poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


that's how everyone is "stoopid" in love for at least once in there lives.
very romantic
very attractive
very pleasing


Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah Valentine's the bane of our lives....lovely sentiments...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautifully penned my sweet friend! :))

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is one innocent and cute poem, Tony :-)
Love is such feeling that can fight out hundreds of hurdles to be with that loved one. True love gets embraced in every part of our soul.
Emotions have been conveyed very beautifully through this write.
As always very nicely written, TJ.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I agree 100% - this is a great poem - haha joking, just doing a Trump there.
I agree 100% th.. read more
Manu

7 Years Ago

Every poem that is written from heart is a great poem, Tony. So this is indeed a great poem.
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Very nice and very romantic poem. Hope u had a good valentine.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Manasa.L

7 Years Ago

Sure your secrets are safe with me dude!
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

No I didn't. I had a bloody awful one.
Ana left and I feel responsible again ! but I am not .. read more
Manasa.L

7 Years Ago

I don't know I am not used to this girly thing coz I do accept people as they are. Not interested in.. read more
I came to offer a review in return for the two you left me (so I'm a cheapskate).

Love the author's note about the captcha.

I usually don't review poems because, well, I just don't get poetry, but I'll take a hack.

This poem belongs on a Paper Moon Graphics Valentine's day card. Like many men, I hate hyperbole. This poem takes a Tina Turner "Rivers Deep – Mountain High" turn straddling seriousness, but the sixth stanza (are those called stanzas in this poetic form?) sheds plausibility and forced involuntary stifled chortles. Title and text united, hyperbole morphs to good natured humor and your Valentine's day after poem entertains. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

It was all as you said Chopstix.
The guy is clueless and hapless and lots of other 'less-es' .. read more
Very sweet, chalked full of sentiment and romance. I think it's good any old day of the year:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Thanks E.M. - any day can be Valentines.
I hope you're well my friend.
:))
Smiling here...a day late and a dollar short, Tony! Filled with all the romantic euphemisms and still unique. I enjoyed it. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I can laugh about it Lydia.
I'm sure other guys have had much worse experiences lol.
Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

We all had horrible experiences with young love....I think it makes us stronger.
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

It makes us pay for delivery instead of using bicycles to get flowers to them...lol
naw.. Im .. read more

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