It happened

It happened

A Poem by Tony Jordan
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The day she said 'it's over'...

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When my life paused
when my blood froze
when the dam in my eyes burst
when the world reverted into a frightening place
when                          re-filled the void
when I lowered my head again
when I felt so lonely
when you said goodbye

© 2017 Tony Jordan


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There is nothing like that emptiness when you lose someone, whether its from a love union that's run its course, or a loved one passing...it's so hard to let go and face each day knowing their life force will not be a part of your world anymore. Your words are simple, but poignant. They touch the heart like an uber sharp pin, pricking just enough to draw that glistening drop of blood. Well penned, my friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I invest it all Pam. I'm the guy at the roulette wheel or at the craps table shoving all the chips o.. read more



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There are times when you have to tell yourself that it's over 'cause that person left you hanging, leaving without even a goodbye,just like that.. and you're left wondering what you did... and that moment is like an in-between situation..you can't let go and not even give up hope that maybe there's a 1% chance of their returning back...
I'm sorry I'm rambling Tony, but this piece brought back memories.. I totally feel how you feel.. Heart-touching, my friend..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Sorry its take so long to reply Yumna
Thank you so much for your review
:))
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Hey, no problem buddy! You're always welcome 😊
The heart wants what the heart wants, and sometimes there's just no getting over it. But the letting go is the hardest part.

It reads with a pulse, Tony!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

So true Kelly - once in a lifetime the one that we can't get over changes the whole landscape foreve.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

7 Years Ago

...my pleasure, darlin! x
first divorce, lost my best friend...hardest part of it all, and all these things happened.
j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I feel your pain my friend.
Losing the best pal, I agree, worst aspect of all.
Thank y.. read more

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Added on February 13, 2017
Last Updated on February 13, 2017
Tags: love, breakup, heartbreak, devastated

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Tony Jordan
Tony Jordan

United Kingdom



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Just writing to get it out My avatar is an actual slice of an onion that I cut up and I kept and froze - it reminds me of the saying - If you don't laugh, you cry. more..

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