Powerful and brutal! My younger sister committed suicide 7 years ago, she was overwhelmed with the pressures and and expectations of a career that she seemed born for. Yet it crucified her in the end. The emotion and despair of this piece is deeply felt. R xo
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Holy f*ck Rach.
I am sorry for your loss.
......... xxx
This piece has many layers! Well done!!
I love how you have expressed the inner feelings of the one taking his/her life.
For those who have not ever considered it, I imagine it's hard to understand it.
You eloquently said all that needs to be said with so few words. It's really quite breath taking. It's hard to capture, but you did it! EXCELLENT!
Tabby
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7 Years Ago
Tabby - it's difficult to express the feelings of what it's like - best way I could say it was that .. read moreTabby - it's difficult to express the feelings of what it's like - best way I could say it was that I felt like a dog with such crap on my coat that it was going to drag me down slowly - when I made the decision it was like a dog shaking it's coat and feeling free again. Your review said it 'breath-taking' - it was like taking a breath for the first time in years.
7 Years Ago
I can relate. Years ago I tried to take my life, and also almost had it taken.
I feel
.. read moreI can relate. Years ago I tried to take my life, and also almost had it taken.
I feel
Like others try to describe it as hopeless or desperateness, but I feel those words somehow fall short. I'm sure that's what the feelings are but for me your words offer interpretations deeper than words can say. Like when our language falls short but if we word it just right a few words can invoke an understanding that touches the soul. If you know what I mean.
Glad your still here!
Tabby
Yes I have heard many say that they attempted it out of the feeling of desperation. Mines was a need.. read moreYes I have heard many say that they attempted it out of the feeling of desperation. Mines was a need to escape the doggedness of...well...life.
It feels so ungrateful to say that even now some days I wish it had went the other way - and I berate myself for thinking like that because I realised how lucky I was to live especially when a family member hugs me and I them.
Thank you Tabby :')
7 Years Ago
Surviving it takes us to a different place, I feel.
A place of perspective.
We are sur.. read moreSurviving it takes us to a different place, I feel.
A place of perspective.
We are survivors Tabby !!
I'm glad you are here with us too (hugs)
x
Tony, I can relate to this at some level.. I think suicide seems an easier option when we think life isn't under our control.. But when I think back to why I didn't commit that act, I realize I used to think it would affect no one. As in what difference it makes on anyone when someone takes their own life except for the person who did?
This was a really tragic piece with deep thoughts! Just passing by to read it ☺👍
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7 Years Ago
Between a living hell and suicide - the answer does seem to be an easy choice but the repercussions .. read moreBetween a living hell and suicide - the answer does seem to be an easy choice but the repercussions are felt at many levels.
One young man I knew - the funniest, most polite gentleman (and champion boxer no less) killed himself - then his younger brother who idolised him followed suit 6 months later. The family are totally devastated.
On a lighter note - you look familiar...hmmm...is it Sonam Kapoor....or Vidya Balan perhaps?
7 Years Ago
I totally agree! Some circumstances can't be avoided..
Haha Tony!! None, just a tiny kid here.. read moreI totally agree! Some circumstances can't be avoided..
Haha Tony!! None, just a tiny kid here 😂
Hope you're doing okay and the cafe too 😉
7 Years Ago
Looking forward to your return as Dr. Key...
;p
7 Years Ago
I can't wait to get back too 😛
7 Years Ago
Don't have to use the Key - the doors always open here at the Cafe.
:DD
7 Years Ago
Hahaha I thought you would be more serious by now.. Apparently not 😂
7 Years Ago
I stopped being serious when I was 15. Started when I was 14 1/2. Didn't care for it much - haha read moreI stopped being serious when I was 15. Started when I was 14 1/2. Didn't care for it much - haha
I hope your exams are going well my friend?
7 Years Ago
Cool! I'm gonna have to take lessons in humour from you 😉
7 Years Ago
Haha - I will take sarcasm lessons from you then.
lol
7 Years Ago
Hahaha I didn't think I was sarcastic around here! Am I?
7 Years Ago
Are you being sarcastic now?
7 Years Ago
Haha I think you don't need lessons from me 😛
And no I wasn't! See the perks of being out.. read moreHaha I think you don't need lessons from me 😛
And no I wasn't! See the perks of being outspoken 😂
7 Years Ago
“Sarcasm is the lowest form of wit, but the highest form of intelligence.” ― Oscar Wilde.
Oh this is great and I really like the last part. I don't support suicide, but I definitely don't think people's feelings are being heard.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
No - it is still very much a taboo subject - very much stigmatised Nicki, well said.
Inroads .. read moreNo - it is still very much a taboo subject - very much stigmatised Nicki, well said.
Inroads are being made though.
Thank you for your review.
:)
How can we treat suicide with disdain? To my thinking, it takes the pressure of sheer desperation to even contemplate it and even more courage to attempt it. This was a "shock" piece of poignant writing that was completely different from anything else I have ever read by you Tony, and it really hit home.
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7 Years Ago
I think creative minds are more likely to take this route for some reason. I think that's why it str.. read moreI think creative minds are more likely to take this route for some reason. I think that's why it strikes a chord in such a community as WC.
Thank you very much Norman for your words.
:)
Whew, this one hits hard...especially with your fantastic ending. Sadly most people do not even try to live their lives let alone live it to the fullest. Great write Mate. Valentine
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7 Years Ago
Well that's a very interesting take on it Kathie.
Thank you for your review.
I appreci.. read moreWell that's a very interesting take on it Kathie.
Thank you for your review.
I appreciate your visit.
:)
Wow this is really heavy, but well written. It reminded me of The Lottery at first, which is a good analogy for how damaging and belittling words can be to someone who is already hurting. It's a really touching piece.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
It is a lottery in a way - all the wrong things happen in the right order and we fall.
Thank .. read moreIt is a lottery in a way - all the wrong things happen in the right order and we fall.
Thank you for your kind words em.c.s.
:)
Tragic perspective.
Unfulfilled dreams often make us feel as if our lives aren't amounting to much. However, like Yogi Berra once said, "It ain't over 'til it's over."
Many a human life has been vindicated at the eleventh hour.
Powerful offering, Tony!
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7 Years Ago
Anyone who quotes the soothsayer that is Yogi is always welcome on my pages.
Thank you very m.. read moreAnyone who quotes the soothsayer that is Yogi is always welcome on my pages.
Thank you very much Jimmy - you lifted me there.
:)
This is such a beautiful piece, it's difficult to call work dealing with subjects like suicide beautiful, but it really is. Despite being hard hitting, it deals with the subject sensitively, and I love it. Thank you for speaking out
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7 Years Ago
Thank you Molly, I'm glad you think it was sensitively handled - that was my main fear in writing it.. read moreThank you Molly, I'm glad you think it was sensitively handled - that was my main fear in writing it.
:)
Just writing to get it out
My avatar is an actual slice of an onion that I cut up and I kept and froze - it reminds me of the saying - If you don't laugh, you cry. more..