Now this is something...These are my favorite kind of poems to read. Short, sounds like a verse in a song, and tells a story we can all relate to.
This made me think of an astronaut, un-tethered and free floating in space. He looks around at the vast spectacles of space in awe of its glistening ore, but then he looks down at the luscious Earth below his feet and see's a parasitic mob just gouging the hell out of it.
I enjoyed your poem! Thanks for sharing.
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7 Years Ago
Amazing imagery in your review Shy Joe.
I loved it!
Thank you for sharing your thought.. read moreAmazing imagery in your review Shy Joe.
I loved it!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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Thank you again Andrew. I appreciate your thou.. read moreI hope this shows up - having diffs replying.
Thank you again Andrew. I appreciate your thoughts.
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Wow wow a very good one, Tony :-)
Earth is precious, save it.
Earth has been sold to walk on the moon. And the ones who sold it are now digging their graves by targeting the sun and by searching the life in other stars.
Strange world!
Keep up the good writing.
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They actually fixed the review reply glitch Gorthi.
That's a powerful image 'digging their g.. read moreThey actually fixed the review reply glitch Gorthi.
That's a powerful image 'digging their graves' - and oh so true.
A chinese saying (which was more of a curse) was 'May you live in interesting times.'
I guess we are...
Thank you very much Gorthi.
:)
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Yes Will, I have seen how adept you are at the Japanese short forms. I've had the pleasure of readin.. read moreYes Will, I have seen how adept you are at the Japanese short forms. I've had the pleasure of reading some of them.
Thank you my friend.
:D
Earth was get-able.
If the moon, sun and stars were available--somehow, regularly reachable--they'd soon be drawing bids, as well.
The way of it.
Insightful piece, Tony.
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7 Years Ago
Moons next. Then Mars. Greed knows no bounds.
Thank you Jimmy.
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What are dialeks? Is that a dumb question?
I really like this poem. We have so much to be thankful for and yet...
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I'm afraid I was having a little fun at my reader's expense there Papaya. I mess words around at tim.. read moreI'm afraid I was having a little fun at my reader's expense there Papaya. I mess words around at times. The Author's notes example is - "What you think of the dialogue?" which I thought read like daleks - so dialeks was born. I guess a dialek might be words that can exterminate. (I'm weird I know, sorry).
As a mum the main source of your worry is obvious. "What are we leaving the children and their children."
Thank you so much. I appreciate your review. It shows you read every aspect to get to know the writing. That's class !!
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7 Years Ago
You're welcome Tony, this was one is very meaningful.
Thank you very much Ana.
It was one of the most 'automatic' poems ever.
As you know - .. read moreThank you very much Ana.
It was one of the most 'automatic' poems ever.
As you know - some write themselves.
:))
Just writing to get it out
My avatar is an actual slice of an onion that I cut up and I kept and froze - it reminds me of the saying - If you don't laugh, you cry. more..