Touching love

Touching love

A Poem by Tony Jordan

touch her 
fingertips with yours in
a slow methodical 
dance of the digits from index 
to pinky 
then thumb press gently forward 
and feel 
the resistance melt 
let your palms find each 
other
feel both souls reaching ~ 

illuminating

knowing

forgiving

promising

loving

© 2016 Tony Jordan


Author's Note

Tony Jordan
For Note for Reviewers - see Note for Reviewers panel
captcha coleslaw - haha - probably right (again)

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I'm not a big fan of romance - here I go again - but, you've done it again, you can not only do it with emotions, you can also do it with simple acts, make them into thingies like this that can actually tempt me to get into romance, it is as if each frame of a single motion was captured and worked on by hundreds of artists - well not exactly like that, altho I like you I still wont say you're this great, neither am i dangit, but i like how you're able to "capture" these "frames" and the beautiful way you do it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Lol - this great or that great - anywhere on the 'great' spectrum will do me all day Winter but I do.. read more
winter;lyra

7 Years Ago

I have experimented it @_@ was awkward the few times i delved into that strange place
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Love is awkward by definition so you must have been tapping a good seam.



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Gee
Mr Jordan, good morning. Loved this. Being the soft hearted Southern fella I am, better tell you that many a night I nod off to sleep holding my much better half (!!) hand....psssst, don't tell anyone

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gee

7 Years Ago

LMAO, my how politically correct this Wednesday morning finds you old bean, proof, LOL. Send 'em bo.. read more
Gee

7 Years Ago

Even this poxy kindle won't type poof
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

ah the old Glasgie kiss eh? lol
I'm good and all the better to see you in such fine fettle.
I love this one...

Romance is always a pleasure and certainly a guarantee to light any fire within.

Wishing you well.

Alisa ;-0

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Wow - you do. I'm so grateful Alisa. I've read your work and this is your park I'm playing in so tha.. read more
Alisa Js

7 Years Ago

Hi Tony,

You can play in my park, anytime...

You are more than welcome.. read more
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Aww thank you Alisa. I think I may, it's quite beautiful here.
Have a wonderful New Year and .. read more
Tony Jordan,
Thankful in the touch of your special one! You have shared it with dignity, even purity. Rich poem! Kathy

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Memories Kathy...
but what memories !!
Thank you very much for reviewing this one.
read more
Kathy Van Kurin

7 Years Ago

Tony Jordan,
Memories are alive. Interesting how we all understand and know this. What a bles.. read more
one of the reasons, i like this so much is that i really miss holding hands...people don't do it enough anymore...they walk behind or ahead...rather than beside.

thank you for this.....

j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

like two christmas tree lights in circuit we glow ever brighter in this state don't we J?
Tha.. read more
I find myself objecting to just one word here. Otherwise I find myself using the much abused word lovely. And another; loving. And another; beautiful. So there is just that one word you use that jars just a little. Should I mention it or not? I find myself asking.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Please do Ken.
I think I know which it is though.
:)
thank you Ken. I hope you .. read more
Let the fingers do the talking starting with the entree, a caress. A master of love I detect Tony

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I like your menu mate, but also I think if I were anything but a novice in the realm of love, I woul.. read more
andrew mitchell

7 Years Ago

Lol..............sharing is caring! :-)
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Haha - I hear ya!
xD
Many do the caressing with no love involved. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Lol.
I'm not that type of guy but yeah, it's 'out there' but very tongue in cheek - no make .. read more
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

See now I've broke the guy code of Omerta and I will be 'fixed' haha.
I hope you're happy Kat.. read more
Valentine

7 Years Ago

I am laughing but was thinking...now you have stuck your foot in it.. Kathie
Not detecting much stealing, here.
Amazing methodology, though.
Quite lovely piece, Tony.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I know Jimmy.
This needs work.
Starting with the title.
Thank you as always .. read more
Jimmy Yetts

7 Years Ago

Did not mean my first line to be taken critically, Tony, it was meant as a compliment.
As far.. read more
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Aha, well I wasn't too happy with the title my friend even when I posted it or the description. I'm .. read more

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Added on December 25, 2016
Last Updated on December 26, 2016
Tags: love, steal, bad-timing, hands, hearts

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Tony Jordan

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